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Tom Hart

On Nov 21, 2020, at 13:43, Vivian <vivian.unger@...> wrote:

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Hello again,

I hope I'm not driving you all nuts with this, but I've rewritten the petition. You see, I got to thinking about literacy.?

If we're going to reach more people, we need more accessible writing, especially in NB, which has a pretty low literacy rate. But the original petition text tested as "college level" and "very difficult" according to .

So I rewrote the petition to be easier to read. It says pretty much the same thing, just in different words. Here's the new text.

As long as no one objects, I'd like to go with this version.

Thanks,

Vivian Unger

Fredericton, NB, Canada

Land of the Wabanaki Confederacy: Wolastokuk (Maliseet) and Mi’kmaq

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